I need help with my cover letter?

Take out: I am writing to inform you that..its better with just i am interested. Now What exactly are you applying for? Working with dogs or answering phones? Be clear at the beginning. I like the personal details added but less might be more. Take out: I also enjoy working with people. you stated that you work well with others already. love your ending: Thank you for your consideration. I’m looking forward to hearing from you to learn more about this unique opportunity. This is all I can add im not a professional but I have done a few cover letters.